I love how her bangs go to side. most of the time fan artists just leave them, as if they are glued there or something. Lame people.
and i like how the ends of her hair curve and point. Just because its strait when she stands still doesn't mean they are in blocks. They are individual hairs! And a square when tilted does make a point.
all of this is awesome in every way. Every. Single. Way.
Wow! You got Hinata's eyes dead on and properly detailed. That's kind of rare with her fanart. One of the biggest mistake people make with Hinata, Neji or any Hyuga is that they give their eyes a 'shine'. The Byakugan is supposed to be without the shine found in eyes.