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Line and Color by ~NinjaMia

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The line drawing was well executed, but the coloring needs to be more bold. Don't be afraid to go darker in the shaded areas more. This will bring out the light areas better and give the artwork more depth. The hair color seems to get lost with the skin tone a bit especially around the face. Research the skin color as it seems a bit too pinkish-red?

We have seen this angle and design repeated in most anime series. It does however make for an excellent centerfold poster with this style. You do get to see more of the character,
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Normally I try to avoid this because I don't want certain people to judge me because of me critiquing this and I'm a girl myself, but the hell with that! People are going to judge me anyway and this is art! I'm going to critique it! Since I'm a huge fan of anime, I first want to say terrific job on how you drew her. Her bust size isn't to big and her hips aren't to narrow. Everything is evenly shaped and proportioned. You gave it a very, well, anime like feel. You should go into drawing if you weren't thinking about it and do more anime drawings. How things are now, anime fans like myself need more anime in our lives to help us forget about what's going on in the "Real World". The only thing I wish you could have done is make a beach background with the sky and sun hitting her. That would make the picture more fantastic and beautiful for people to look at. Aside from that, this is great! (thumbs up) Keep up the good work, man. We need more artist who are good with anime like you!
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Luiz43 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2014
Excellent work!
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Viracon Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
 Although the lines and color were done by you, its still a trace and you should really credit the artist, and source. 
The original work was done by Dall-Young Lim & Kwang-Hyun Kim for their manga. 

Its never a good habbit to get into tracing lines and passing them off as your own. Its not to hard to make your own bodies, its the only way you'll improve. 
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Betakamo Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Those curves.....
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flyhighskylark Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
is this Satellizer? great angle and greatt job! :iconpervplz:
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NinjaMia Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yes :)
and thank u :D
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jesseakiza Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is actually Elizabeth Mably ~
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kigiemoru Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2013
ME gusta :D
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Fire-Z Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012  Student Filmographer
Where's she from?
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NinjaMia Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
From the Manga "Freezing" =)
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CherlnIDA Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Ooh, nice colors, the blue is very relaxing gives a laid back feel. :la:
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ILoveDiscoPie Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
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DeadCobra Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2012
Hot time
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NinjaMia Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:heart:
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IzId0r Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Nice :)
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johanSPV Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
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B-RianI Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2012
Wow, good job ;) looks nice
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tlb19 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2012
but she is very Hot =)
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Enzkun Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2012
Suddenly i feel like going out for a swim....
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AJInu-Okami Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I like it. She looks beautiful, the angle looks cool, and the perspective looks great :)
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ArtbroJohn Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Very nice work!
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rapperfree Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
omfg that is hot!! hnnnnnggggg!!! boobies! :iconirapeitplz: :iconfapguyplz: :iconmegustamuchoplz: :iconspazattackplz: :iconbonerplz:
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NinjaMia Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh my :D Thanks :D~ :iconblushplz::icontrollfaceplz:
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rapperfree Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
no problem~! ^^ your art is just so fricken sexy! :iconpervplz:
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NinjaMia Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
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rapperfree Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
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xXxMysticalDragonxXx Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
cute/adorable/sexy


that's all :iconloveblueplz:
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NinjaMia Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Aww~ Thank u :heart:
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JeremyOsborne Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
Wow love that position, awesome angle
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NinjaMia Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank u so much :)
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millochibi Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh yeah
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NinjaMia Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:icongrin--plz:
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